Stories by Balasrinikesh Dhanavel

Wanna feel a near Death experience???  Read Now 👇👇👇  Title: Misery  Author: Balasrinikesh Dhanavel  I... I couldn't breathe.  My throat, it was too tight, I couldn't even throw up.  My eyes, it was like they're glued shut My legs, they were so heavy I felt pins and needles.  "AGHHHHHH"  I couldn't even cry out for God's sake.  I felt sharp things through my skin, for whatever reason they didn't hurt. "NO NO NO NONONONONO!!!" Sarah!!! Rachel!!! Were they in the car?  I... I couldn't remember "I... I'm SORRY" My chest, it was as heavy as a dumbell "WHAT??? WHY THE HELL IS THIS HAPPENING TO ME!!!"  Then something weird happened "What is this I'm feeling?" It was my tears. For the first time in what it felt like decades. I could feel my eyes rolling under my eyelids.  Never have I ever thought I'd regret getting out of such a misery. As I opened my eyes, I couldn't believe myself.  ...

You wake up in car trunk, tied up without escape What's next???  Title: Bound Author: Balasrinikesh Dhanavel  THUD, I heard as I bounced on the very little space I had. I couldn't see a thing, My head was fuzzy, I tried to breathe, my ribs felt like a cage, It was like someone was sitting on my chest. The rope, they made my limbs numb. At least the gag was loose. I should've screamed for help but I didn't.  After a while, I heard a noise, it's like someone opened the trunk of a car. I was pulled by my arms, I fell and broke my nose. I was dragged by my feet. My hands were behind me, sandwiched between me and the ground, rolling as I was dragged away, "the hell do you want you sick Bastard!!!" I shouted. We came to a sudden stop, he kneeled on my chest and punched my face multiple times. I couldn't help but laugh, after all it was my first time experiencing this end of the spectrum. Apparently I made him mad, he stomped on my face till I fai...

Hey guys!!!  This is the trial post for the ne w sci-fi comic series I'm working on. It's performance would help me decide if I can can move forward with this idea. I'm planning on posting weekly after outlining the story.  So feel free to give me your thoughts on this, I'd love to hear them. You can check the dubbed video of this comic strip on my INSTAGRAM Thank you Guys!!! 

You are a cop. Are you gonna let your brother get into the family business???  Title: Inheritance  Author: Balasrinikesh Dhanavel aka Bala in SnipFic "You sill gonna keep doing this?" I questioned him. "Why do you care?" He kept chewing his damn sandwich. "You think Dad would want this?" He stood up and slammed the table. "THAT BASTARD'S THE REASON I'M LIKE THIS! WE TALKED ABOUT THIS BEFORE" I was furious. "You really wanna die like this?" I grabbed him by his collar. "He should've thought of that before snitching on our uncle.  Look the other way or you'll end up in a body bag too" He pushed me away  He really crossed the line there. I sighed, "I'm sorry, Sam".  I slammed him to the ground and cuffed him. "You know your rights, either snitch or rot away in prison"

You love your children right? So... Are you ready to do whatever it takes???  Title: Pengwing  Author: Balasrinikesh Dhanavel aka Bala on SnipFic "Why now? Why me?" I flapped through the Strom, trying not to throw up our food. I couldn't help but think about how I protected them between my legs, hoping my children don't freeze before they hatch when she goes away, filling her stomach.  I didn't give up back then, and I'm not planning on giving up right now.  Few days ago, my pack planned on going back to the colony. Me, who is a bum wasn't a good hunter begged,  "Guys please! can we just stay here a little longer? I still have to get food for my kids" They left, leaving me behind. Only Riko, who's like a brother to me stayed with me. We were hunting for hours. I had little to no luck.  That's when it started, the rain. Riko insisted we go back. "Yeah, I'll have to adjust with whatever I have" I said before follow...

You finally have the guts to confess your feelings. Ready to ask her out???  Title: Friends?  Author: Balasrinikesh aka Bala on SnipFic  "You free Sarah?" I messaged her with a tight grip on my phone. After thinking for a second,  I was thinking of deleting it but she started typing... She replied, "Yeah,what's up?" I couldn't get myself to ask her that but I eventually replied, "Well..... You remember the girl I was talking to you about???" "Yeah! The one u wouldn't tell me the name of?" "Yeah" I replied with a sigh "so... You finally asked her out huh? 😏😏😏" My heart was racing, I replied "Well... that's you" "WTF???" she replied. I knew she was mad.  "If you want we can still be friends" I replied before her pfp vanished.

You just hatched from your egg, you have nothing but your instinct to hunt in your head, but you're smaller than your siblings. Can you survive the wild??? Title: Darwin  Author: Balasrinikesh Dhanavel aka Bala on SnipFic "Why? Why am I weak?" I thought as I wandered, searching for something to eat. My siblings stole my food, the worms were too quick, I was starving. That's when I saw an isolated ant. I waited for an opening, I  lunged at it and stabbed my mouth through its abdomen, melting it from the inside. I started drinking its insides. It felt so good, eating for the first time in days. That's when I felt it, the pain. More ants surrounded me and started biting me. I tried stabbing them, there were too many of them. I tried running, I couldn't feel my leg. In the end, I just gave up. After all, I'm the weakest Assassin Bug.

The Trinity test has gone wrong, The world is a wasteland, What's next??? HeatWave Author : Balasrinikesh Dhanavel aka Bala on SnipFic   "It's really hot" he whispered with his half-melted face. The last person I live for was reaching his end. I said, "Don't worry, we'll find a way" holding back my tears. The next heatwave was getting closer. This time I wouldn't be able to save him. I hugged him with my shells facing the heatwave. I was crying, my tears were vaporized.   Before the heat consumed him, he said, "Thank you for being with me, don't blame yourself, it's not your fault I didn't become a humanoid crab" I fainted as I tried my best to protect him. Context:  The Trinity test has gone wrong and changed the world, causing storms of radiation aka heatwaves every few weeks. Most people died instantly, some people died slowly over multiple heatwaves and very few people mutated (only a few of them are able to ...

DC (the Tamil movie) is one of the best movies I seen this year I'd give it a solid 9 out of 10 but This post is about the guy people call the villain in the movie, Bhojaraj played by Srikrishna Dayal. The thing is I don't see him as a villain, from my pov he just tries to catch the people (Devadas's gang) who robbed the weapons that belonged to the police and brutally killed the Investigating Officer. Yeah, I know that his methods are questionable but deep inside I see a guy who is just tired of the system and is molded by it. The ends justified the means. The only civilian casualty he caused is Devadas's first love interest, which is clearly unjustifiable but it adds depth to the character. Villain is a person who does unjust things, but most of Bhojaraj's actions just helped him get close to the armed and dangerous criminals. From my pov he tries to do the right thing by questionable means, he is more of a Anti-Hero than a Villain. And her...

You and and your wife are working for the same agency as assassins. One day someone hires your wife to eliminate you. What happens next? Let's find out!!!  A Love Triangle  Author : Balasrinikesh Dhanavel aka Bala on SnipFic   I put my gun in the holster as I entered the house. The clock showed 7:25pm. I sighed as I had five more minutes to clock out of work. As I was drinking water, I ducked. A knife stabbed the water purifier. "You took that job!?"I asked to the woman coming downstairs. "Well, a job's a job right? Sounds like someone's scared!" "shhhh, you're gonna wake him up"  "That never stopped you from finishing the job. Don't tell me you've gone soft" she said with her creepy smile.  She jumped towards me. I tackled her, pushing her away from the kitchen counter. She grabbed my collarbone. I smashed my head on her face a few times and choked her, trying to hold her off for a few minutes. She stopped str...

Hey guys! I finished the 3rd issue of Dynamite's Ben 10 last night. It's a really great issue with some really great moments.  Here is a brief non spoiler review.  It's the best of the 3 issues released. Most important of all it featured my GOAT🐐🐐🐐 Diamond head. His design is very cool. I just couldn't believe my eyes it was even better than what we saw in some of the the concept arts and varient covers. It really got me hyped up for the next issue. And it also seems like Ben is not having his no kill rule but it's not a problem with me as long as they don't mess up my man's character. And they also showed us why Tetramands (Four Arms) are a force to be reckoned with. I'm pretty sure Grandpa Max would definitely farm some generational aura on the following issues, I'm pretty sure about that. That's my review guys!  If you guys like it, then feel free to check other stuff on my blog.  Thank you guys♥️ ♥️ ♥️